I have learnt from marking other work is
(i)when writing introduction, write a good introduction-begin by going straight to the point
(ii)when writing, write a conclusion.
(iii) use events and changes to link your ideas
If write this asssignment again, I would improve are
(i) write a good introduction and ending with a good conclusion
(ii) use real people to support my ideas.
(iii)give reasons on why the rights I chose were related to the topic.
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