Peer assessment part 4!

Peer Assessment by Josh



Reflection & self evaluation:
a. What have you learnt from the peer assessment?  How can you use this to develop your own learning?  
I had learn that I could have put more empathy in my work from Josh's comment. Empathy is one of the important key in  Humanities, without it, it will be quite difficult to understand the task we are doing.  
b.  What new targets do you need to set yourself?
If I can do this again, I would use Fakewall, like how Josh used because I found it quite useful. It also show lots of empathy, like Facebook. 

Constructive Feedback

LI: To understand what constructive feedback is and how to use it! :D

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My definition of what constructive feedback is.
Constructive feedback is when you giving advices-things that you like about it and things that can be improved.

Some examples of constructive feedback.
Examples:
Your work is excellent because.........
but then.........

87%
Your work didn't get full marks because you forgot to ......... But your work was well done. 

Good work
Good work ..... but you could improve on....

Iqbal Masih by Zhermaine

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MY HISTORY OF HUMAN RIGHT TIMELINE

Empathy....

What are your success criteria?
My success criteria:
1. To know who is Iqbal Masih
2. To know more about his background/story
3. To write a biography about him

Have you achieved them? Yes/no/not really. Why or why not? And evidence?
Yes. This is because i know Iqbal Masih, for example: "he was murdered at the age of 12. He started to work at the age of 4."

Done on my IPad 2.....
Got it 2days ago!!!